College Essay & Applications Counseling
Ivy Ed offers college, prep school, and graduate school essay and application assistance.
Come join an Ivy Ed College Counselor and other seniors for a 2-hour application marathon. The College Counselor will guide you through the process of completing the entries (Activities section, etc.) in the Common Application.
Join an Ivy Ed College Essay Specialist and other seniors for a 3-hour essay marathon. The Essay Specialist will guide you through our unique process. You will brainstorm and likely get the first draft of your application essay from attending one of these. If you have limited time and enjoy the energy of many minds at work, this option is for you.
Prep School Application Essays – Our essay experts can also help students with brainstorming and basic editing for prep school essays.
Graduate School and Professional School Applications – Several of our essay experts are experienced with the essay and application requirements of graduate and professional schools, and we are pleased to offer our services to those who are applying to advanced degree programs.
How do We Know When Your Application Essay is Ready to go?
Here is Ivy Ed’s “litmus test.”
- Did the student write an engaging and reflective piece or an English class essay? (Hint: Do not write a 5 paragraph English essay.)
The content of the essay is more important than the number of SAT words it contains. This is not a formal English essay, so it doesn’t have to begin with an introduction and end with a conclusion. Although the grammar and syntax should be correct, the most brilliant writers often have the most informal writing styles and can even make an error for effect. Remember that the essay should be easy to read and that simpler is better. Just relax and write from the heart — show the admission officers who you really are and what makes you tick!
- Does the reader like the student after reading the essay?
These essays are a way for the admission committee to get to know the real you, not a place to portray an idealized version of you. Reiterating the accomplishments already noted in your resume will make you sound self-promoting rather than likable. If you try to tell them why you are so great, you will just end up sounding phony. The essay topic that most frequently fails this part of the litmus test is one in which a student describes his or her experiences with those less fortunate (in a developing country or through a soup kitchen, etc.) and writes about the experience in a way that establishes an ‘us’ versus ‘them’ mentality. This topic can work, but only when you bring freshness to the essay by showing your personal growth, without contrasting your life with those of the people you helped.
- Why is the student telling me about this topic, issue, story, etc.? Is this your story? Is it your true authentic self? Can it be said in one sentence? Did the reader get to know you better?
After reading an essay at Ivy Ed, we always ask ourselves if we learned about the student beyond the resume, transcript, and letters of recommendation. If you write about something that could have been said in one sentence, the writing might be wonderful but it may not have any depth to it. Also, while it is fine to take a risk and write about a topic that is emotional for you, you should make sure that you have a good reason for sharing the information with the admissions committee (e.g. it explains a drop in your grades).
When our essay specialists meet with students and parents for the first time, we often ask tell me a story that is so you. Sometimes students need to do research–ask friends or family about an anecdote that reveals their personality–but it’s worthwhile as the stories we get are very telling. What may not have been very memorable for a student, may stick out in someone else’s mind. We’ve learned about our students’ hidden, secret talents, and kindness and sensitivity towards others through stories their families and friends remember. And when you tell your story, tell it like a 17-year old. We can sniff out–and admissions committees can, too–when an essay has been over polished and edited. Keep it conversational. You haven’t yet had a college education, so you’re not necessarily expected to use college level words.
- I the essay memorable and is the student-writer interesting? Does the reader want to continue the conversation with the author after reading the essay?
It’s 2:00 AM and the admission counselor is tired, or worse yet; s/he has been reading clichés for hours when s/he gets to YOUR essay, which may be less conventional, but is also more memorable. In the world of competitive college admissions, you want your essay to stand out, so think out of the box and avoid clichés. Above all else, don’t simply tell the admissions people what you think they want to hear. You will end up sounding just like all of the other students who decided to do the same thing. Instead, be genuine, be passionate, be specific, and be unique!
The New York Times selects four essay finalists for a yearly piece, and one enrollment officer said of a successful essay, “I wanted to have a conversation with her about it….And I love leaving an essay like that, where you want to say, ‘Let’s keep talking.’” Imagine you were sitting next to somebody on a long six-hour flight. What would you talk about with the person sitting next to you? Or flip it around: would you want to continue to talk with them if they told you this story?
- Can the student relate his/her experiences to a broader perspective?
Colleges are looking for students who can make connections between their experiences and those of a broader world. Showing that you can analyze ideas behind stories about yourself or about other people will demonstrate your ability to think deeply. For example, did you take a vacation somewhere (i.e. Europe, South America) and were you able to draw connections to another experience, i.e. being in a new college atmosphere? Or have you read a specific book for pleasure that reflects your academic interests and possible long-term professional pursuits? Even better, have you read a book by a member of the college’s faculty with whom you might want to take a course or get involved in extracurricular activities, again reflecting your broader world view?
- Do you show that you possess soft skills such as grit, perseverance, the ability to recover after a failure?
Some of the best essays we’ve seen are about failure. There is much talk in society today about allowing ourselves to fail and getting up and going on. Didn’t make the uber competitive club/sport/play/whatever at your school? Tell us about it…what are you doing instead? And, perhaps more importantly, what did you learn from this so-called failure? Grit and perseverance are million dollar words in the college admissions industry for a reason. Colleges want to know that the students they admit can make it through four (sometimes grueling) years of reading, writing, designing, building, leading, exploring, and growing. And these “soft” skills will help you in your work life, too!